Zornkatzu's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[NB dance (round 3)]

Nice Improvements!

This one was a bit easier than the last couple. The fact that the arrow flashes if successful also helps alot. Not a bad game at all! Good job!

Btw, my score was 1250.

[Xaxle's Space Invaders]

Go Space Invaders!

Nice remake of a classic! The music used when the mother-ships passed along the screen was excellent, and the controls were top-notch. Unfortunately, not much was added in terms of features, but hell, classics were meant to be re-lived, not re-written!

Well done, man! Please make more classic games!

[Cartman Drawing]

Different!

Its nice that you incorporated 4 different ideas into one. I liked that since so many people are now submitting JUST a dress-up game or JUST a soundboard. Anyway, to make reviewing this easier, I'll review each segment individualy.

Cartman Mouth -- This part didn't really stand out much. It just kind of showed the many mouths of Cartman for no particular reason (except to print out or trace, I suppose). However, it does tie together nicely with the other parts. Not the cream of this flash;s crap, however not a bad addition either. 4/10

Dress Up Cartman -- Ahh, the classic dress-up game. This one had a great selection of items to use and was put together quite well. The addition of some background South Park music would have been a nice addition, but wasn't too necesary. Alone the dress-up game would have been enough to pass judgement, but as a collection its even more impressive. 7/10

Talking From Show -- Once again, another classic. The soundboard. Not too many sounds to choose from, but again with all the other things in the collection, the lack of voice overs is hardly a let-down. With a couple of exceptions, the sound quality was quite good and I liked the clips that you chose. Not a bad peice of work. 6/10

Body Parts Find -- Quite an original concept. A little bit easy though, because simply scrolling the mouse can reveal the pieces. Again, some background music would be nice, but its absence isn't a total loss. Not a bad idea, and fairly well put together. 5/10

Overall not a bad collection of Cartman-related ideas. In terms of improvements, I would only add some more audio clips into the soundboard and add background music to the areas mentioned above. Good luck!

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Thanks for the review!
I think the first thing should have had a sound for each mouth, so you could make out random words and it would own :P
Perhaps I should make a flash just for that... with a key to press for each sound... ;P

[letters (demo)]

A nice game, in theory.

However, I found the game to be a little difficult. Immediately hitting one key after another was fairly difficult, especially for someone like me who doesn't know all the keys off my heart.

However, I did notice that the game was very intuitive. It knew excatly what button I was pressing and would accept it immediately, without any wait or lag. Pretty impressive!

Another thing though was that the overall presentation looked kind of bland. Perhaps it could be improved a bit when the full game is developed. Perhaps adding some good sound would aid in that area.

Anyway, this is a really nice concept game. Perhaps you could take my suggestions as well as those from the user before me and turn this into something really great. Good luck!

AcidDimensions responds:

I review your review:

General praise, feedback personal experience, specific praise, sprecific constructive criticism, a positive summary with encouragement.

Really nice. Covers all the bases well.

Feedback on your personal experience gets me thinking about how to improve that experience. Maybe if you'd gone further, said what level you got to, did you have to retry levels a lot? That'd be even more helpful.

Great review. Maybe more criticisms would be nice (give more things to improve) but it's good to occasionally get an upbeat review like yours.

And you manage to do that without seeming trite or refusing to criticise at all.

6/10

Thanks for the review.

Maybe try Skears DX if you feel like it. I'd be interested to hear what you think of that. Or the old abandoned version of Skears 2.

[Tactical Assassin]

Really well done!

This combines strategy with sniping in an original way. I found myself repeating levels multiple times to find the right combination. As frustarting as that was, its the way these kinds of games should be. Highly deserving of being the highest rating game on Newgrounds!

[StickMan Sam - Part 3]

Well done again.

Another great chapter to the Stick Man Sam series. Keep this up!

[Fear Unlimited Full Edit]

Phenomenal!

Phenomenal!

Can't say much else about it. The controls are tight and everything flows really well. This very well may be the BEST shooter -- if not the best game -- on Newgrounds today! Impecable job, and I can't wait to see more!

11/10 -- Easily!

[Adrenaline Challenge!]

Well done!

This is just like a flash version of elastomania (though a little more fast pace). Nicely done!

[The Amazing Face Maker!]

At least its not a dress-up game (technically)...

but it's still the same kind of aspect. The concept is there, but more pieces and accessories would have been nice. Its origniality allowed it to pass judgement, but try to improve it and perhaps your current score will increase.

[windows 200000001]

This is really bad...

there was no real change in what happened between pressing buttons. As well, the icons were drawn really terrible. I'll give this flash 5/10 however, because it makes a good point. Microsoft charges us $120.00 every couple of years for a slightly less crappy piece of crap, because most people are uncertain of how to use Linux. Anyway, I enjoyed the humour in this flash, just try to work on the drawings.