Zornkatzu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Barbequebeefburger]

I could be very serious....

and start going on about where you went wrong, and start reviewing graphics and stuff. However, I won't do that, because this is not meant to be serious. This is a simple little flash that really had no meaning. It didn't exactly appeal to me, but not a bad job at all! 5/10.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Thank you for review.

[BatteryClock 1 (beta)]

Wow. If this is teh Beta....

I can't wait to see the full version (I'll have to view it next). Anyway, the 3D effects used were really well done, and the humour used in this flash was nice. Hopefully, the full version that was uploaded onto Newgrounds will be a bit longer, but other than that there isn't too much room for improvement (except for the blood which did seem a little wierd looking).

Anyway, not a bad CC movie! Keep it up!

DazFromTaz responds:

Thanks for a good review!

[Eternal Complexity]

Again...different!

Note: In my review of your flash "Cartman Drawing" I mispelled 'crop' and instead put 'crap'. Sorry about that :$

Now adays we see the same things come into the portal over and over again. This, however, is different. The drawings were superb and the animation was great! I liked the concept and, despite my gead hurting from the Eternal Complexity, genuinly liked this flash. In terms of improvement, since something like this hasn't been yet before (to my knowledge) there isn't much advice I can give you. Simply an overall good flash! Well done!

carmelhadinosaur responds:

Thanks!!
Lol crap :D
There actually were two things, one differnet from this one on NG, and one on a site with zoomed out pictures. Saw them after I made it o'course :P

[%]

I'll review each sub-flash one by one.

MastaBreadfruit -- Despite the brutal randomness of the flash, I found it kinda funny. Could have been better though, had you added sound. The drawings were great and from what little animation was present, you did a good job. One thing I didn't like, however, was the random ending. It just kind of, stopped. There wasn't really any conclusion. 4/10

Albino -- That Clown is very annoying. However, the flash itself wasn't too bad. Again, the randomness was a little strange, but the humour used made up for it. Although teh sound was pretty annoying, at least it was present. As well, your flash also seemed to end abruptly, with no true ending present. 5/10

MastaTruffle -- Not very good, I'm afraid. I wouldn't mind using this to scare the shit out of one of my friends, but as a flash, it doesn't really do much to stand alone. In the future, I would try to add a little more to the flash, instead of just a screaming clown. 2/10

Overall, though its a decent collection, it feels a little limited. Perhaps adding a true conclusion, and relative sound where necessary would help bring out the flash worls better. Good luck in the future!

['Asteroids' music video]

Well done!

A really unique flash movie. Ot was nice to see taht you added the Special Features BEFORE the movie began, giving the viewer something to do during the load (although the load is far from being long).

The drawings weren't the greatest, however because this was about a dream, realism in the drawings is hardly necessary.

In terms of improvement, there isn't really much I can tell you. The only thing I would perhaps improve would be the general length of ten flash (which in this case, was quite short). Other than that, it had just about everything! Keep it up!

Bezman responds:

review of your review: A good useful review.

Starting off with some general nods of approval, you then specifically praise the time when the special features loaded.

You made a vague criticism with reservations re: art.

Then you made a specific suggestion re: length before rounding off with a positive summary.

Though not very long (not that it's very short either), your review does have praise, specific criticism, and a summary. All the essential elements in other words.

You do have a typo in the 1st line, "...flash movie. Ot was nice..." but that's of little consequence.

It'd be nice if it was longer and gave yet more specific feedback on anything you may have liked about the movie itself or any other criticisms.

Is the length the only real imperfection? In what way could the art have been better? Colours? Technical analytical accuracy?

5/10

A useful review and one better than a lot of NG reviewers'.

[Corrupt Voting Day]

Despite the lack of animation...

I found this pretty damn funny. Your accent in the flash certaintly matched the message you were trying to pass on. I also have to agree that about 90% of flashes pass judgement on Clock Day and many of them have very little effort put into them (minus those from regular authors and the REAL CC members). Anyway, I liked your idea, but I think it needed more. Perhaps next time you could add somne animation or make it a little more dressed-up so to speak.

-Mitsubishi-

Andersson responds:

Thank you very much for that.

I will add animation to the next Clock Day...

Anyways, thank you very much for your review.

/Mathias Andersson

[Asgard's Flash Tutorial]

Very helpful!

I'm fairly new to flash and this will help me out alot! Now maybe I can submit something portal-worthy to Newgrounds! Nice job!

[Mega Man vs. Quick Man]

A nice tribute to Megaman!

The drawings, animation and sound were all top-notch! It really shows what the early Megaman games might have looked like re-vamped and brought into todays consoles! Nicely done, keep it up!